Editorial Project

We've been asked to do 4 one week projects. This is the first one based on a short story called Stanley. It's not quite finished, but it's not far off. I don't like the story, since the girl in it is obviously wierd. I decided to illustrate the scenery because its very discriptive. I quite like it, but I haven't finished yet, I'm worried it might look a bit muddy, and the bank of the canal isn't defined enough yet, I might go down to the canal and take a few pictures and see if they help.